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Informatik overload
I think this is a importal topic in today’s society. People are surrounded by informations from TV, news paper, internet.. (Správností této věty si nejsem jistá,měla by znít takto:Lidé jsou obklopeni informacemi z televizí, novin, telefonů…) Many people today do not go anywhere without their smartphones. There is no escape form the internet and than we can have some big problems . The informatik overload can make people feel anxious because there is too much to do and not enough time to do. People can be less creative. The informatik overload can make people less productive. People who multitask take much longer and make many more mistakes.
These are the problems that I've observed on me.
This is my opinion about it and I think we will spend less time on our smartphones.